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µoªí©ó 05-12-4 17:38 | 11¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
       夜晚,,,

   牙駿黎左啦,,但係佢好似有d唔妥喎,,

   我地上左牙駿屋企,,換衫,,

   我見到,,佢件衫有血漬 !!*不會吧?!

   於是我拎住件衫問佢,,, [[ 牙駿,,點解...... ]]

   [[ 冇野喎,, ]] 佢笑左笑,,

   [[ 真係,,?咁點解件衫...... ]]

   [[ 真係冇野喎,,因為............ ]] 佢暈左 !!

   [[ 挑 ! 又話冇野?! ]] 我扶起佢,,,and then call白車,,

       我好擔心佢牙,,,跟住我諗返起今朝佢接左個電話,,會唔會同依件事有關呢??

   於是我查返打比佢果個人既電話(衰格xd),,再打比果個人,,

   [[ 喂,,? ]] 係1把男仔聲,,

   [[ 係咁既,,你識牙駿既可?! ]]

   [[ 駿哥喎,,梗係識,,你係邊個? ]]

   [[ 我係佢個fd,,佢入左廠,,我想問............. ]]

   [[ 咩話?!駿哥入左廠?! ]] 佢打斷左我,,=  =

   [[ 冷靜d,,我想問你佢做咩件衫有血漬既?! ]]

   [[ 今日有條仆街走黎踩駿哥場(disco),,駿哥同佢打起上黎 !! ]]

   [[ 下?! ]] 打到咁 !!

   [[ 係邊間醫院牙?! ]]

   [[ xxx醫院 ]]

   [[ 哦 ]]

       跟住佢cup左我線,,=  =

      e生出左黎,,於是我即刻上去問牙駿點,,好彩,,牙駿冇事,,已經醒返啦,,

           我衝入去病房,,

   我:[[ 妖,,嚇死我啦你 !! ]]

   駿:[[ sorry ]]

   我:[[ 係喎,,你d口靚話你去劈友喎,, ]]

   駿:[[ 嗯,, ]]
 
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µoªí©ó 05-12-4 18:49 | 12¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
好睇呀!加油..!!!
十卜你..!!!!
 
 

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µoªí©ó 05-12-4 18:52 | 13¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
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µoªí©ó 05-12-4 20:14 | 14¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
加油!

不知道為何,個人對一些太口語化的文章感覺總是怪怪的。
 
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µoªí©ó 05-12-4 20:18 | 15¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
寫快D丫,,好想知點呀!!!十卜你嫁!!!
 
 

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µoªí©ó 05-12-4 20:26 | 16¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
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µoªí©ó 05-12-4 20:27 | 17¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
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µoªí©ó 05-12-5 21:50 | 18¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
       突然,,成班人衝入黎,,其中一條口靚好激動咁問,,

   [[ 駿哥 !!你冇事牙嘛?! ]] 係電話果把聲,,

   [[ 冇事喎,, ]] 牙駿答,,

   [[ 佢係邊個,,,,,,?! ]] 條口靚指住我問,,

   [[ 我條女,,叫牙嫂啦,, ]] 牙駿飲左啖果汁,,望住我講,,

       而我聽到佢咁講,,面都紅哂,,dup低左個頭,,

   [[ 牙嫂,,! ]] 成班人望住我叫,,

   [[ 你.... ]] 我啤住牙駿,,牙駿係度奸笑,,=  =




   [[ 牙嫂你好,,我叫牙恆,,係駿哥d口靚,, ]] 條口靚走埋黎同我講,,

   [[ 你好,,我叫牙素,, ]] 我握佢隻手,,佢面紅,,

   [[ 我條女令呢?? ]] 牙駿笑住咁問牙恆,,我就面紅,,

   牙恆係度笑,,
 
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µoªí©ó 05-12-5 21:57 | 19¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
作快d呀.....好好睇呀...^^
十卜你呀...
 
 

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µoªí©ó 05-12-5 22:12 | 20¼Ó TOP ¥u¬Ý¸Ó§@ªÌ
[QUOTE=winnie0303]§@§Öd§r.....¦n¦nÚ»§r...^^
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